She was certain she’d lost him. In her panic she’d taken a shortcut through the trees and managed to drop her water. Hours on, her mouth was dry.
Birds quietened, declaring the day over – not that it was for her yet. She had listened to footsteps – sometimes behind her, sometimes in front. They stopped when she stopped, perhaps mere echoes off the trees? Perhaps not.
Certain she was nearly safe, she rounded the corner onto a path.
But now the day was over.
The water bottle dangled from a branch. She’d been running in circles.
And so had he.
This week Norah Colvin is helping out at the Carrot Ranch with a guest post and the following flash fiction prompt.
April 20, 2016 prompt: In 99 words (no more, no less) write about a circle in your life. Is it a supportive circle, or a circle that entraps you? What’s its significance? Take you where the prompt leads.
May 9, 2016 at 2:24 pm
I enjoyed reading this. The end was very intriguing.
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May 5, 2016 at 5:13 am
I love how you incorporate circles. It was such a fun take on it, having the characters running in circles looking for each other. Well done!
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May 3, 2016 at 6:15 am
Gah! 😳 That’s a good one, Lisa. I love it!
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April 26, 2016 at 9:01 am
Grisly.
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April 26, 2016 at 7:53 am
Great take on the circles, Lisa. Hope you’re feeling a bit better yourself too.
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